 Alida Inc 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by NeonQueen, Feb 29, 2012.

  1.  Do you want a honest review of you story? Do you Want more then just a "bump"?

    I'll review any story posted on this thread.

     Warning I'll be harsh, but very honest with all reviews. I'll point out all mistakes and tell you wants on my mind 

    What ever story is posted here, I'll give them a review then post about my experience in reading that story, here, along with all the others I have read.

     I'll read any story.

    Post the name of your story below.
     
  2. Please review Red Velvet? .-.
     
  3. Falling and Tearing apart? :3
     
  4. My invisible story
     
  5. Seems legit Ari
     
  6. It's the best yet
     
  7. Ahhh... please review Amore Andante! I want to know the truth if it's really good or not. The people on KaW said that the people on PIMD are suck ups and pretend to like other people's stories to make them feel good!

    I cyber punched that asshole out 
     
  8. I know you did Katie
     
  9. NEW LOVE PLEASE?





    Why am I yelling?
     
  10. Okay try Lies My Parents Told Me.... It's... Well find out for yourself Sissy 
     
  11. If you have time, may you please try reading Desperate? I really want an honest review about it. Thanks. 
     
  12. I know you already did, but can you review Deadly Sin? Now that it has more updates out
     
  13. Can you check out Different? Please? Thanks!
     
  14. Please review Remains of the Day or Big Mistakes