Detective. Drew

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HEXIN, Jul 21, 2011.

  1. Official thread for Detective. Drew.
     
  2. And the dead body's bff. 
     
  3. This is based on one of my favorite Games, L.A Noire! Enjoy!

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    Detective. Drew chapter 1 - The murder case

    Luka walked drunkly in the empty street of California night. There was a silhouette of a man. It looked like he had a knife with him. He ran to her and stabbed her on the stomach. She fell to the ground. He stabbed her repeatedly, and repeatedly..

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    A man who had black hair and blue eyes walked into the Chief's office in California Detective station. The man had a leather black coat, he wore all black to be precise.

    " Drew.." The chief said, with no enthusiasm.

    " Gallow.." Drew said

    " I've got a case for you....it involves you having a partner."

    " what?!?" he said, shocked.

    " She's a trainee! So yeah, she should be here any second now.."

    " Whoops! Sorry I'm late!" a woman said behind detective Drew.

    He looked behind and saw a woman with curly blonde hair, sky blue eyes, and has an athletic body. And has scars but know one notice's except Drew. And she looked like the same age as him.

    " Um..hi, I'm detective Drew.."

    " Oh hi! I heard all 'bout you! You solved that case with that missin child who was sent to Iceland!"

    " yeah..no big-ish! "

    " get down to work detective, no time for talk." Gallow said angrily. " A woman was stabbed several times last night.. I believe her name was Luka."

    " that's all I need to know chief, thanks."

    They went off to Drew's car. It was a It was a black Mazda. Drew drove to the murder scene.

    " I never actually get your name..what is it?"

    " Kaylee! But you can call me Kay."

    " no thank you, I'll just call you Detective Kay."

    " o...k..."

    " your a trainee, huh? I use to be a trainee once.."

    "What was it like?"

    " horrible.."

    " Why?!?"

    " It was like you were a sidekick for a superhero, and now..I'm one and your my sidekick."

    " well..that sucks for me.."

    " yeah, I know.."

    They were there, and a few people tried to look what was happening. They got off the Mazda and a policeman approached them.

    " Well?" Drew said, waiting

    " there was a murder here. There's some sort of message on her face..it wrote-

    " I'll check that myself.." interrupted Drew, he went to see the dead body and the clues. On her face wrote, 'P.R'

    " Hm..P.R..what does that stand for?" Kay asked

    Drew said " don't know..."

    " maybe it stands for....poopy...rat....?"

    " Where the Hell did you get that idea??"

    " beats me.."

    They went over to a clue, it was a bottle of rum.

    " it looked like she drank." Kay said putting on her plastic gloves and grabbing it.

    It was broken. Shards of glass were missing and the end was sharp but no blood marks.

    Kay stayed their while Drew walked over to another clue. It was her purse. He checked if any money were stolen but there wasn't any, but there was blood stains on it.

    " Detective Kay, come over here.."

    She went over there and he showed the blood stained-money.

    " hm..it looked like the murderer stabbed her hard, if he wanted that much mayhem.."

    " looks so.." Drew said, seeing other clues in her purse. But there wasn't other thing else.

    " she looks like in her teen age and she's drinking...maybe her friends might know something.." Kay said

    " yeah, I'll call the operator.."

    He went to look for a nearby phone, he did and called the operator.

    " this is Detective Drew, badge 1313..I need an address for Luka's high school.."

    He waited a few seconds and got a response.

    " give me a second detective..........her school is California high."

    " thank you operator."

    He hunp up and he wrote all his clues in his little notebook.

    " come on detective, were off to Calufornia high." Drew said to Kay.

    Both of them went to the Black Mazda and drove.
     
  4. Dang, you beat me to it!
     
  5. Detective Drew chapter 1 is in fan fic
     
  6. Dang I was suppose to copy and paste that..
     
  7. It's good so far! I love my character. 
     
  8.  poopy...rat? lol
     
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  10. Lol yea and I like it
     
  11. kay you sound like Cat..
     
  12. when will i
    come im
     
  13. You'll be in it! Just wait!
     
  14. I'm awesome 
     
  15. You were there!
     
  16. Is my first name ever gonna be mentioned? And great so far
     
  17. I think I'm coming in soon (;
     
  18. Hm, probably your first name could be shown.
     
  19. Lol your WELCOME..
     
  20. Can't wait for it