Read my other forum who should I choose and I hope u enjoy this ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ As I was walking down the street to get to school i see the cute boy of the school Lucas . I kept walking but he walks over to me. What's going to happen? What will he say? He says" hey Riley whats up?" I say" hey nothing much you" " same " he says and we continue walking to school and then he says" Riley would you like to go to the movies with me on Saturday " I say" I don't know I have told you this before" " yes but I won't give up I will have you no matter how long it takes" he says and was gone . Lucas has been my friend since preschool and we always hung out until last year when he became mr popular and forgot about me. I was walking down the hall and all I heard was Lucas this and Lucas that from the girls . I rolled my eyes. Who has nothing better to do than talk about Lucas? Then mrs popular Mia walks up to me and says" I hear you and Lucas have been talking and he's mine so if it keeps on like this I will destroy you and your pitiful life!" I smirk " yea right so what will you do you don't fight" and with that I go to find Lucas . I found him and said" yes" He says" really!" with his whole face glowing. " yes really" I say and he hugs me and I start laughing and right then Mia comes by and gives me a look that says I warned you and walks off. The day went by as usual until there were some people yelling fight fight fight and I could see my best friend Jackson fighting another guy named Blaine . They were finally split apart and I asked Jackson what that was about. He said " I caught him kissing my girlfriend so I punched him but I dumped her because she kept saying she told him to and not to do it" I say" wow that sucks " " yea I guess "he says" so how was your day anything interesting happen" I say" no but I have a date on Saturday " " with who?! " he says " Lucas " I say " Why would you go out with that freak he's to popular ." I say" i don't know he's been asking forever so I just said yes to see how it goes" " oh ok " he says" do you need a ride home I guess I made you miss the bus " I say" yea "and we get in his truck and drive off towards my house . When we get there I yell " by Jackson see you tommorow " He says" ok " and drives off and I walk in my house. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Sorry it's so short but I didn't want to right to much before I knew if ppl would like it and also it may seem like any other story but there will be a dramatic change in events to were it will be an actual fiction storyI hope u loved itand also read who should I choose it is real good and also looking for new characters
Don't just use the word "say" when somebody speaks. Use "exclaimed" or "explained." And don't say "I say" use "said" past tense is key
Yay I got a bump soon I will make the second who should I choose but I still have to finish the first one
Yay will you read who should I choose and see if anythings wrong with it cause like I said not very good at doing this stuff