Phase

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by DoneDeleted, Jul 18, 2012.

  1. Hey everyone! It's great to a new story, but I think it shall be my last, I have so much to occupy. So I went and added all the dedications from the people that weren't dedicated AND deserve one, so here is the list, and if you think you should be dedicated, I apologize and shall account you in the "Family of Dedications."
    Blood_Roze
    Emilya
    CaNaDiAn_BaBe
    Danzo
    Charlie-Bush
    -Angela123-
    Happiness_Sadness
    Amy_bear
    AdamGontier
    PARTYFREAKLOVER
    Ladyviolet
    skinnyminny
    -WebbyGoziBear-
    Naughty_wolf
    Zeke???? Can't remember the no.
    Flubberj
    Apple??(Kat)
    EliMansion
    Tash777(Still can't remember)
    And many others! I'm sorry if the ones that they think that they should be dedicated, I shall go and post, and I hope you all will enjoy the new story!
    I shall be writing it soon, so please just comment what you want right now as I write the new story!

    You all and the stories you some have created, its been a pleasure being in the FF family.

    ~Toxic
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  2. 

    Boom, boom.

    Do you hear that?

    Boom, boom.

    That's the sound of enthralling hearts beating as one, climbing into a sink of forgotten. The heart is one of the main chambers of finding your own way of breathing, a unique sound.

    It travels through an ear, which rests the crying baby, warms the smile of another, and can, and now will be, finding your own Strength.

    It isn't hard to find the adrenaline you hope for, that salivates your tongue and edges of your seat.

    That voice.....speaks for one.

    My eyes rose, in the faxing, pitch dark, as I traveled through the night, with one sound that allures me to follow.

    That heart.

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    Feedbacks?
     
  3. You are a great writer keep it up
     
  4. I WAS DEDICATED!
     
  5. Your last story?! Nooooo!!  Okay I love the way you explain things and detail it! 
     
  6. Re: Phase

    Bumping this back to the first page...
     
  7. Apparently it's not my last...
     
  8. don't end!! I love your stories!! And bump this please!
     
  9. Bump!! Awesome start!
     
  10. I dont get a shout out
    What is this?!?
     
  11. I WAS DEDICATED!?
    HELL YES!