Hey my second story! This is just off the top of my head .,. So please dont just leave bumps ADD SOME BAD SHÏT I SHOULD IMPROVE ON PLEASE! My heart is racing. My feet are pounding. My Arms are pumping. I run. As fast as I can. Objects around me zooming by as I here the beast behind me. Panting. Coming closer, and closer, and..... BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEEP BEEEEEEP! "NOOOOOOOO!" I scream in a shrill high voice then I wake up. Look around and sigh. It's dawn, the sun streaming through my lacy purple curtains. I sigh and push back my poka doted covers, my bare feet touching my wooden floor. Looking around me I make sure everything is the way it was when I went to bed that night. My dresser; yup still in place with the many pictures of me and my friends on it. My vanity; that old gourguse thing sitting there. With my makeup, hair stuff, and earrings on it nearly. My desk; oh my lovely desk. A white board top and seven lavender colored, cubbies down the side. My pine shelves are still there with my many books. I smile and then walk over to my closet. My purple pj bottoms folding around my ankles, and my loose t-shirt flaps around my small body. I have long brown chestnut hair that goes past my shoulders and side bangs that I love to French braid to look like a crown. My eyes. Well they are a dark dark grey. Yes grey. I absolutely love them to bits. I have a normal figure with size nine and a half feet. I am '5'7' I know. I am tall. I open up my closet and start to pull out my rainbow fold over converse when I see a small envelope fall out. I shrug and close the door. Leaving the envelope inside. Little did I know then and there I was changing my day from GREAT. To HORRIBLE! And little did I know, that envelope, would not only change my day, but my whole life. Forever. What does she mean? what Is in that envelope? hope you like my work! (I would say lovely but I don't want to sound like a bítch lol)! Thank you! If you bump and post helpful tips! Bye bye for now!
I'm pretty much the secretive story writer/reader around here. So pretty much I know all the stories around. But still good job
Mostly everyone who writes just get bored at some point. But it's great that you can do a good story without effort, just by boredom. Update soon.
BOOOOOOOP! Time to begin with chapter 2! I know! I know! I'm amazing! I run out the door yelling. "BYE MOTHER! BYE KEVY!" Then race to the bus stop. I love feeling the crisp wind flash through my hair my converse pounding agents the cement. I see the bus just stopping at the bus stop I swing myself onto it and get attacked by a surge of voices."SOPHIE!" "SOPHIE!" "SOPHIE!" laughing casually at all the kids I bus help as they high five me or hug me on my way to the back. I then see Emily, Zach, Lexi, Angi, Bryce, and Dante looking up towards me. I make a strange face and the girls make one back. Laughing again I sit down with Emily. "Helllllo." (short sorry all of a sudden got writers block will pick it up tomorrow)