[color= sky blue] I stare at the sky, there are no clouds, I can see the brilliant blue of the sky. Lighter in patches, darker in others, the sun beams down on my face. It's a clear day…obviously. I touch my spiky, ginger hair…like fire my mother says. Said. Freckles, my face is engulfed in them. My olive toned skin doesn't work with ginger at all, I should've stayed out of the sun. I brown eyes, what an unusual form of ugliness. The only remotely beautiful thing about me is my physique, I've always loved water sports, kayaking, sailing, wind-surfing. Living near a lake where all these things are feasible that has given me masculinity. My arms are built high with muscles and I have distinct muscles on my chest. But as if that would be enough to change my level of beauty. If anything it adds to my constant mutation look. I pull myself up from the grass and crunch over the gravel to my house. Its very private here, no one to comment on my appearance, I get to live in peace away from people, except on nights. I work part time as a bouncer at the most popular bar/club in Cirencester.
Oh no I hit send by accident, oh well I guess this is enough to go on. And I know I have a reputation for leaving my stories but I've finally found a plot I like. Now for the dedications iLeo
Oops cut off iLeo and Bonez (CIDRE VAN) for reading every one of my stories. Ant for loving my freakiness, giving me an awesome nickname, being the #1 weirdo and a dedicated friend. Ant 'n' Dez Ant 'n' Dec PieSexual for inspiring me and my writing. Last of all AdamGontier for his creative flair, descriptive talents and brilliantness.
Cherry Very interesting, it gives me a greater look into your story, as I should do to others, I want to dig in. Not sure what's exactly happening, but it's a good start. Good luck on your story
[color=sky blue]I stared at the yellowing picture, motionless. Her smiling face, her twinkling eyes, her beaming smile. Then the fat cheeked baby bouncing in her harms, the tanned skin, the chocolate eyes. I seemed content, my eyes were half closed, suggesting sleep. That's the only photo I have left of my mother, and my drawings, thousands of them, in the kitchen, eating, dancing. She loved them before she died. I pull on the black waterproof bouncer jacket, stepping into the heavy, black boots. My keys jingle in my fingers as they sway, I open the door, feeling a cold rush of air hit me in the face. I close my eyes and feel the breeze. When my eyes do open I stare at the sunset, it's beautiful, a subtle pink just visible on the horizon. I slam the door shut and stride over to my black Honda civic. Jumping on the right side, I start the car and reverse onto the narrow path that leads down to the lane. Pine trees lay at either side, blocked off by a low wooden fence. The gravel crunches underneath the tyres and I open all the windows with the four buttons on my right. I slowly type the post code into the built in GPS system. I've been there so many times I don't need it but I always have being OCD makes it very difficult to change my routines. As I make onto the equally narrow country road a deer bounds across the road. Abruptly I reverse backwards, slamming against a tree, now I start to hyperventilate, the anxiety is creeping back in. I forgot my pill. I fumble in the glove compartment, searching for the bottle as my chest heaves up and down. I take the bottle and nervously open the cap, but my hands are shaking a pills spill all over the floor. Now this is beginning to anger me. I storm out the car, locking it behind me and race in to the field, the straw like grass is up to my neck. I don't know where I'm going but I run anyway, letting the plants scratch my face and legs…[/color]
Don't lurk Leo! I wanna hear you! Leo join Future Combat it's another a thinking ape app except I'm not silenced over there! My user name on Future Combat is Cherry131
I swear it's like 4 and a bit cos you've known me since the end of March… Anyway I just wanted to point out that: A) I Luv ya! B) You're awesome C) please join future combat another a thinking ape app and add me as Cherry131 D) it feels like forever!