The Lucky Ones

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -_Devestator_-, Oct 22, 2012.

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  1. I'm going to finish the story later but I am going to introduce the characters,and plot first!
    Plot:The Year is 2012 and we are still in Iraq. A specialist team of 3 men are on leave with there family and they get a surprise call to action and it unfolds with action and suspense.
    Characters: Sgt.Spartan (Me/Zach) Cpl.Nick (Nick) Cpl.Jake (jake) Sgt. Spartan's wife Yuki (yuki) Cpl.Nick's wife Aly (Aly) Cpl. Jake's Wife (Emma? Idk)
    Thank you and I will see you in the update! Or if I left someone out.
     
    #1 -_Devestator_-, Oct 22, 2012
  2. More characters: Pvt.Eric (Eric) Pvt.Beast (Beast) Pvt. Eric's wife (Sky) Pvt.Beast's GF (Lexi)
     
    #2 -_Devestator_-, Oct 22, 2012
  3. Yup! Emma is correct!
     
    #3 tarru, Oct 22, 2012
  4. And I can't wait to read it!
     
    #4 tarru, Oct 22, 2012
  5. Thank you I am going to make it good
     
    #5 -_Devestator_-, Oct 22, 2012
  6. I wanna say "die bîtch" at some point in it
     
    #6 *Bro_emokid (01), Oct 22, 2012
  7. so far so good
     
    #7 iBubbaisTrash, Oct 22, 2012
  8. Yeah we all will have our moment of glory trust me
     
    #8 -_Devestator_-, Oct 22, 2012
  9. Imma bump still lol ._. thats right u bets make it good... IU Zach!
     
    #9 *XxDark_AngelxX (01), Oct 22, 2012
  10. DON'T BYPASS! The story will get locked of you do! But lol I can't wait to read it! .-. I'm not beasts girl...yet....
     
    #10 -Treasure-, Oct 22, 2012
  11. I you too babe
     
    #11 -_Devestator_-, Oct 22, 2012
  12. Yet...I like it
     
    #12 *Bro_emokid (01), Oct 22, 2012
  13. I want to bust out in Disney songs at random times or say suck on that
     
    #13 *caucasian_asian (01), Oct 22, 2012
  14. Umm Ook?
     
    #14 -_Devestator_-, Oct 22, 2012
  15. U said I could be in it 
     
    #15 MSS_Fuzzy_Buddy, Oct 22, 2012
  16. You are
     
    #16 -_Devestator_-, Oct 22, 2012
  17. Nvm, I see me and Eric, Thnks Zach! :-D
     
    #17 MSS_Fuzzy_Buddy, Oct 22, 2012
  18. I WANNNA DO THE DISNEY SONGS TOO!!!!
     
    #18 -Treasure-, Oct 22, 2012
  19. Guys guys guys, we all know I'm the best singer so I can to do the Disney songs
     
    #19 MSS_Fuzzy_Buddy, Oct 22, 2012
  20. Sounds pretty cool. I have military in my blood and I would love to read your story.
     
    #20 _Tron, Oct 22, 2012
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