This morning I wake up as tierd as ever.My name is Kelsey.I'm 18 and I live alone.I still go to highschool buy ever since my mom and dad died in a car accident I haven't been the same.My grades were up high but down im in D's and C's.I walk to school with my friend Maya.She's a really supporting friend."Hey Kelsey!"says Maya really excited."Hey Maya."I say."Kelsey!Boy Alert!"whispers Maya."Maya I'm not here to talk to boys"I say.But only this time he came to me."hey what's your name?"he asked."ummm... uhhh....K-K-Kelsey."I studder."cool I'm Zach."he says.that small moment we look at each others eyes the we look away quickly.My heart was pumping really hard."you live in this neighborhood?"I ask."yes,I moved in last week."says Zach.the bus arrives and we all load onto it.Our bus ride wasn't as long as usual.we reach our school.CenterScore Highschool. Our mascot is a Lion."Well Zach see u in class if ur in one of my classes." I say. Like it well comment 5 comments is part two!
Is every new person here uneducated? Don't you know the proper writing? Like spacing and paragraphs. Don't forget right punctuation...