Finding The Truth (Collab)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by SolinCarter, Aug 13, 2012.

  1. A collaboration I am going to write with The_Destroyer.

    Finding The Truth
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    Caroline's POV

    I'm Caroline and that's my sister, Solin. I'm 16 years old and she's 13. And that's my friend, he can introduce himself as well. It has been years since my father's death, I hardly remember my father. All this time I've been searching for my parents but can never find them I keep thinking,Things will never be the same, maybe I'm right. Maybe it's time to put away the cape and never look back. That's hard, my alias is Star Wing, I use it because the name sounds cool and it reminds me of the stars but I use fire to strike fear into my enemy's eyes. That is about all I can tell you, there would be more but It isn't coming back to me at all, it just doesn't seem right. How could this have happened, one minute I'm on a trip with my family and next thing I know my father is dead and I've been stuck searching for my mother since, though probably she is dead too. People believe me to be an orphan but that couldn't be right. I don't know, all I know is that my father was shot when I was 13and now that I remember my mother was shot that same night as well. I guess you could say rest in piece or as I always like to say it rest in pieces. Is there no where for me to run?
    My middle name Is Dana but I'm always nicknamed Sara or Ivy, I mean really why would anyone call me those names.
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  2. Remember to use paragraphs, and double space them!
     
  3. I wrote this on notes and forgot to space out the paragraphs here
     
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    Solin's POV

    Ok so you already know my name, at least I hope you do. My middle name is Ronnie, though I'm rarely ever called by it.
    Whoever is reading this please pay attention. If you prefer to call me by my alias, it's TigerBlade, There's a story behind that but I won't get into that. Anyways like my sister said our parents are dead, all we have left are our friends but I don't know where they are right now. We haven't heard from Anemara , Anna , or any of them since last year. Anemara and Anna also have Alias names. Anemara is Ice Blade, but her nickname is Blade.

    Anna is aka
    Water Beetle and she is nicknamed Beetle. I do know that our other friend is aka Tree Sap but everyone seems to call her Fire for some reason. Everyone calls me Raven or Solis but I've been called Tiger before. I think you already know that I'm 13 years old, I was only 10 when my parents died,that's the reason I became TigerBlade, but everyone thinks that The Quails are all vigilantes, but we aren't we are just heroes and heroines, including....including the guy I like.

    I don't remember his alias though he never told me. It seems like its been a long time since we ever met,I only remember Dylan, but I haven't seen him since that night, I keep thinking he's dead but how could that be. Caroline hasn't told me much, at all. That isn't right , I'm her sister after all, why conceal something from your own sister. Dylan's words from our last meeting echo in my head,the whole conversation echoes in my head,Ronnie, You must believe me...You have a power greater than you could imagine,I love you Ronnie, but you must let go of me.

    Dylan, please I don't want you to do this, stay with me please. Dylan please. I love you, your the only one that matters to me aside from my older sister.

    Ronnie,let go, I love you,but you have to let go of me and the past.

    I can't,Dylan, I can't

    Yes you can Ronnie,you just don't know it yet
    . Those last words still echo in my head today, I don't know where Dylan went but I know he's out there somewhere.

    Anemara looked at me,"Ronnie! Snap out of it girl!"
    I looked at Anemara, "What Blade, You can't let me think about dylan even?"
    Anemara shrugged,"It is just in your mind Ronnie, you have to let him go"
    I hesitate,"What if I don't want to, I've tried to let go Blade, I can't I just can't do it"
    Anemara was quiet then said,"It's not a choice Ronnie,you have to let him go, you can, you just don't know it yet, you have the power to do it, you just keep trying to hold on, that won't help."

    I hesitate again,"What would you ever know about it Blade, you've probably never been in love.I promised Dylan that we could be together forever."

    Anemara shrugged,"You have to let go,forever will have to be spent with someone else,unless you can find Dylan again.Forever is a Long time. Who knew Forever could be severed by the sharp knife of a short life."

    I smiled,"Forever may be long but I'll try to find him if I must."
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  5. :) Thanks I'm working on updates to Caroline's pov and Solin's Pov
     
  6. Colin's POV

    My name is Colin Federov. I go by the name shadow dragon I watch over the city from the mantle of the dragon. I use the shadows to make my enemies fear the night.

    I despise the criminals and scoundrels of the city and so I fight to protect the innocent. When I was about the age of twelve my father and mother were both killed by a house burglar. As I stand upon the rooftops of the city I listen for the sound of crime.

    I am now sixteen and I inherited a large amount of money from my parents which allowed me to have my suit made. It's a high tech suit that has infrared vision and many gadgets. I have captured many a criminal and brought them to justice. The only thing I don't do is kill I may wound but I will never kill.
     
  7. Still thinking of something to write but I'll figure it out..haven't written a Collab until now
     
  8. It's really good so far!!
     
  9. Yah just waiting for my Collab partner to put the unnamed guy's Pov up but the guy is now called something, you'll see when it's up if ever
     
  10. I already put it up
     
  11. Ok I'm updating my first character's Pov but still at a bit of a loss for words
     
  12. You did oh sorry just didn't see it
     
  13. It's awesome @ the destroyer
     
  14. Caroline's Pov

    As I'm walking down the street I See Dylan, Anna, Wynne and Anemara. I haven't seen them since last school year. I don't know where my mother could be but who cares I fight to bring criminals to justice, and right now that isn't needed but I am. I walk towards Anna and the others and smile, "Anna, Long time no see, where have you been ?"
    Anna replies to me shortly, "Vancouver"
    I reply to that hesitantly, "Oh..no wonder you didn't call"

    Anemara smiled at me and joined in, "Caroline, Long time no see, I missed you"
    I responded almost coldly, "I missed you too Mara, where have you been ?"
    Anemara shrugged and said, "I was in London, just got back last week."
    Anna replied excitedly, "That's awesome Mara, did you bring anything back for us?"

    Anemara shrugged again and replied to Anna, "I tried to Anna but there was nothing I could've brought back"
    Anna shrugged.


    Dylan and Wynne smiled at me as they walked over.
    Wynne was not usually in a good mood but something about her changed, she smiled and said, "Hi Anna, Hey Mara, Hey Caroline"
    Anemara and I said in unison, "Hi
    Wynne."

    Anna replied softly, "Hey Wynne"
    Dylan hesitated then said, "Hi Mara, Hey Dana, Hi Anna, hey Wynne"
    I was reluctant at first then said, "Wynne where we're you you didn't call ?"
    Wynne smiled and answered excitedly, "I was in Los Angles"
    I replied quickly, "oh, and where we're you Dylan ?"
    Dylan shrugged, "Hawaii"


    Anna smiled and said, "No way Dyl, that's in the pacific ocean, why did you go there ?"
    Dylan smiled and said, "My half-sister, Selena, she lives in Hawaii, so my family and I travelled there for two weeks"
    Anna replied eagerly, "Did you go surfing ?"
    Dylan shrugged and responded, "I tried but I'm only good at skateboarding"


    Dylan turned to look at me and said, "So Caroline, how's your sister, Ronnie,I haven't seen her In forever"
    I hesitated, "Look, Dylan, I know you care about Solin and all but she's just busy, but she's doing fine"
    Dylan didn't say anything more.
    I also said, "Well looks like The quails are back again, I lost my father, he was shoot when I was 13 years old, now I'm looking for my mother, would you guys like to help ?"
    Dylan, Anna, Anemara, and Wynne all replied in unison, "Sure"
    I said in a serious kind of voice but still friendly, "ok let's start then"
     
  15. Solin's Pov

    I looked around and waited by the school for Caroline, then she came into view. I saw behind her four others that I recognized almost immediately. I was at a loss for words almost completely but managed to say, "Dylan ? It's really you isn't it ?"
    Dylan looked at my hair and beautiful eyes then replied almost coldly but it was more loving than cold, "Yes it is Ronnie, I thought you'd never guess, Your sister told me about the search and asked us to help, we have to stick together, it's what our team does"
    I replied out of fear and love, "I know Dyl, I know"

    Dylan was shocked, I had used his nickname only once during our entire relationship, but never said it again, until now. What must be done cannot be done alone, I know that now, I should've listened before but I didn't, I know the power I have I should've seen it, but I didn't.
    I know how crazy this might be but I have to do it, if My sister and our friends can't find my parents, then some of us will die trying, and if we all die trying no one will find out the truth of what happened to Grace Renee Carter the night my father was shot. That doesn't have much to give us, but we don't have a clue to start so we've gone to the only place we could, The streets to find a guy who could help us.
     
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  17. (I'll put the next one up tomorrow)