Okay do this in my first story and I suck at writing so here it is hope you guys like it Chapter 1 I've been here for a week now. I've spent a week in hell. It's scary here. It really is. I've been scare to death here. I wish I was back home in Alabama. With my sweet wife and 3 kids. God I miss them, my poor little kids. It all started last week, I was playing Candyland with my youngest daughter Katharine. Then everything went wrong… Hope you guys like it I love feedback be as harsh as you want with it
Double update for tonight Chapter 2 I was playing Candyland with my daughter when…well, before I go on, I think I need to tell you about myself. My name is Drake I'm about 6 foot even with a black military crew cut. I'm pretty strong but I know how to use my brain too. I'm married to the most amazing woman in the world. Her name is Beth and we have 3 kids Matthew, Romeo, and Katharine. Matthew is the oldest, I picked his name after my great grandfather. Romeo, is our second oldest…my wife picked his name. Katharine is my youngest daughter and loves to play with our dog. Oh how I wish I had our dog Faithful right now. Anyway, me and Katharine were playing Candyland when… Total cliffhanger
Good although most stories I've read have a prologue but hey everyone does it differently but I agree tis quite good
Don't you dare complain on this. If you are going to complain, complain on my wall. And it's your fault you got banned... That is all and this matter is done with. *walks off*
Don't complain on my story please I don't want to have to kick anybody so please don't complain or argue
Sorry I fell asleep I'll update in the next 30 minutes or so but I need you guys to vote wether or not I should make a love interest for Drake
My update are getting longer Chapter 3 I was playing Candyland with Katharine when I won. I had just gotten lucky and poor little Katharine was in tears. I gave her a kiss on the head and said, "it's okay Katharine look you won!" right as I switched the pieces. "Yeah I won!" Katharine said joyously as she dried her tears. I gave her an affectionate kiss on the head which made her giggle and hug me. Oh how I miss Katharine. After that, I picked her up and carried her to the bathroom while she kicked and screamed forgetting about the game already. It took about an hour of kicking, screaming, and pain to get her down but I finally got her down. I went into my room and laid my head down on my soft pillow with a smile on my face. I fell asleep almost instantaneously. My dream was almost exactly like my game with Katharine except for the end, I had just switched the pieces when I felt a hand on my shoulder. I turned around fearfully and saw an orange gummy bear holding a licorice sword. I woke up sweating and said, "thank god it was just a dream." I yawned and got out of bed and went to my bedroom door -which was usually open- and ran into a wall. "WHAT THE HECK?!" I said in pain as I blinked rapidly and looked around. I quickly saw that the house was made of gingerbread. Doing what any normal man would do I screamed and kicked the wall. "Just my luck," I thought as the wall broke off to reveal the gummy bear from my dreams standing in the doorway.