(First Story hope u like it!) There once was a boy and a girl named Bobby Greenwood and Sarah McAllen.Bobby and Sarah both went to school together for a straight two years,Bobby loved Sarah but was too shy to show,Sarah was dying to tell him the same,yet they never did.They both went to the same church alsne day at church they were sitting on the back row playing on there phones.Then a fire started!,Everybody got out...except for Bobby and Sarah.Bobby was stuck under a piece of wall and couldn't get out.Sarah yelled for help but no one could hear."Get out of here! Now before u get trapped!!!" bobby yelled."no! I will not leave you!!!" Sarah replied drenched with tears."Please...just go!!! I can't stand the thought of you dying" bobby said with tears swelling up in his eyes."But I..." Sarah didn't want him to cry so she got up and said briefly before she left "I love you Bobby,I will miss your laugh and personality" Sarah said "I love you too!!! Now please before you are hurt!!" bobby said finally letting his emotions out.Sarah then hurried outside and bobby used his last breath to repeat those three words...I Love You. (Thanks plz no rude comments this is my first story!)
Tecnicly by saying bobby you are using the most used name therefore making it funny referring to jokes
I thought that was a rly good story u should try to make it last longer and turn it into something also use paragraphs and double space Check out my story's the want for you and Forms of love