Here are some poems that I recently wrote to Jose. (-CrazyCookieCrapper-) You and I Together forever, Loving one another. I will love you until the day that I die, looking into your beautiful eyes. Saying "I love you" can never mean enough. This feeling I have for you helps me smile, even when times get rough. You're special and mean so much to me, I even get butterflies when we go pee. The weirdest things we do together, are the moments I cherish most. We can't do it together in person because I'm in texas and you live on the west coast. one day we will be able to touch, and that I would love sooo very much. Jose I love you with all of my heart and soul, and I am sorry that it has been shattered and left so cold. You are the one I choose to make it better. And already it is with just the thought of us being together. One day we will have that, we will grow old together and hopefully we will die together because I can't bare the thought of being without you. Only because I know that your love for me is true, as mine is for you. I promise to be loyal and to never cheat, I will give you all of my heart, and making love will be sweet. One day baby...... I promise we will meet. I promise my love. A.K.A my one and only. Together forever, You and I (august,10,2012) Like you said earlier... We are soon to be husband and wife. You are now the number one priority of my life. In joy and happiness, my eyes start to be tear'ed. Smiling while talking to you as my makeup becomes smeared. Going pee at the same time may seem weird but, I think it's beautiful and some may think that we look cool you make me laugh, you make me smile. I will always try harder and take every bit of life from an inch to a mile. I have completely changed into something new. Happy all because of you. I never knew that true love existed.. Honestly I didn't... But now I do, because I met you. I love you with all of my heart. And for a blonde, you sure do make me feel smart.. If you wanted us to end our life together.. Just to escape this world filled with pain. I already told you that I'd say yes in a heartbeat. I'd do it because I love you, I trust you, and you are sweet d: lol I just want to love you and be with you forever. Like we always say..... Forever together. (august,12,2012-6:12a.m.) -I think that I have finally found true love. One person guided me to you and he lives up above. No not god, but my wonderful dad. I like that you can make me smile when I am sad. I try my best to do the same for you, but you're almost always super duper happy. Even when you see me mad and feeling crappy. Though that does not last for long because you cheer me up right away. I am glad that I have you, day 51 as of this day. Me having you is a blessing and a miracle. I used to always say that this shiit is unbelievable. And sometimes it seems that it is. But i know that we are not dreaming. I finally have the one so now i am believing. It's so amazing just to find someone like you. Perfect, special, sweet, loving, and caring too. Jose I love you so so much, i have an amazing guy that loves me and such. You make me smile, laugh, and cry. I can't wait until 2013 and the day that you will finally arrive. It's been amazing talking to you each and every day and I hope that our love for each other will ALWAYS be this way. / I love you my dear fiancé now please smile because that's the end of my poem and I have nothing else to say. Haha. \- (august,21,2012) ---------------- I hope you enjoyed them. LOL yes I know that they are NOT perfect. These are the first poems I've actually ever made so yes i know that they are not all that great, but I do not care what you guys think. unless of course you guys have positive comments so anyways while you are here.... Please do post your poems here guys and girls
You should try hitting return after every line. It'd make the poem a lot easier to read. Personally, I'm not a fan of poetry.
Agree with Roy. It made me think it was an essay or letter before i read it lol. It doesnt matter if youre not good with poetry, what matters is that you tried your best, and it comes from your heart xD