Separate names with a comma.
You lack a bunch of commas that are needed to avoid run on sentences. And like the others have pointed out, it's better not to use abbreviations....
I pay attention to small details such as that .
Only thing is that the word spin in the past tense would be spun. But other than that, great start.
Bye James.
Great idea zero. Although our club name has an "n" after the "io" in addiction.
I didn't know about her, never met her. But that's seriously such a shame... Especially to lose someone because of what someone else did or said.
Oh, try being less agitated. it's an upgrade. Try upgrading and look at the differences
Sheesh Anubis... It isn't enough you complain on pal? You must add this to forums?