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I'm having some serious Writers Block. I need some ideas. Thanks guys!!
[Nate] Surprisingly, Bailey was the first to open the door and step out. I took a deep breath and followed behind her. I swear I could hear her...
[Nate] "No, Bella. Me and Nate are in the driveway. Someone else is here. A black sedan." I listened quietly as Bailey was on the phone. I was...
I mean to say where he left Bailey.
Forget the word chose in the last sentence
[Kyle] My body felt as if it was shutting down. I couldn't speak without my words being slurred and my legs were about to give out. My vision...
[Question before update] 1. Who should Bailey be with? 2. Wanna see more of a character? 3. What should happen to Kyle? ANSWER AND I'LL UPDATE
[Bailey] The look on Nate's face said it all. He was scared. Nate was captain of the varsity soccer team, class president, and all around...
[Bailey] My head hurt but I payed no attention to it. Along with a headache, I had a heartache. The pain from Kyle's force didn't faze me...
[Nate] I'd never seen Kyle break down before. He'd always hid his emotion from everyone. Even when he broke up with Bailey, his emotions were...
[Kyle] I was freaking out. What the hell did I just do???? Bailey will hate me forever and I could be arrested for this. I shouldn't have ever...
[Bella] I heard the screams before I saw anything. Bailey, I thought. I ran faster than my feet could carry me. When I got there, all I saw was...
[Bailey] Is was as if the next chain of events would forever be etched into my mind. Kyle swung at Eli, Eli swung at Kyle. Nate was desperate to...
[Bailey] "I don't know what to say." The room was spinning. "So say yes. I'll treat you better than Kyle ever could." As if it was on cue, Kyle...
BUMP
[Bailey] I tripped over my feet on the concrete of cold sidewalk. Bella and I split up when she went to meet up with some other friends. I walked...
[Kyle] When we pulled into the parking lot, I saw her. My body froze and all o could remember was her pixie like hands holding mine, her warm...
IF it's not okay**
[Two] My thoughts overpowered my self control and they took a wild ride. I was gazing out the passenger window in Nate's car and biting my thumb...