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I do not want to continue this story ON THIS TYPE OF PLATFORM. I think that it would be better for me if I wrote this story somewhere else because...
Brilliant!
Ok this is coming from the author of the book. If you don't have anything positive to say do not say anything at all. I accept feedback but not...
@CaughtInCookieJar, What would you do to make the story better? Also,thank you for the feed back even though its ultimately negative.
@redtiger, you are a negative person. You think that everything that is better than you is worthless which is simply not true. If anything, you...
Jesus I got chills from reading this. It was that good.
@thatonemerchant, thank you for the tips! also for defending me. I already have almost gotten silenced for cursing out a ignorant commentor.
@red tiger, thank you for your feedback and if you had read on you would have seen that there is no cursing past chapter 2 or 3 I think. But after...
***Due to the comments, I have decided to keep this standard writing style. This is the first and only time I will change it! Thank you for...
Thank you! @CharliesScene and @ ahsleymac14
@CharliesScene: What would you recommend to make this story better?
Snowwhite kitten: You obviously don't have any background in comprehensive reading. Because you lack skill in that category. As far as I can look...
@CheekyChloe. Thank you for the tip.
@DMA-snowwhitekitten- I believe that I am using complete sentences. A sentence consists of a noun,verb,beginning capital letter,punctuation,...
*******I'm trying the standard writing style only for today.If I feel comfortable with it I will continue.******* Chapter 3: The bell...
You will see as the story progresses how her dad comes into play. Also why she craves for attention is going to be adressed.
Chapter 2: Ashley: WHAT??!! Mrs.Gill: Ma'am you need to have a seat! First off, you are late to class on the first day of school,Second, you...
I need 2 more REAL comments like the first one.
The problem with that type of writing style with this story is that it would make the story sound weird to me.but i will try to incorporate that...
*****These are not real events that have happened to me and this is not my name******* Intro: My name is Ashley. My dad died when I was 3 of...