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Is that any better..
I guess ill keep going with the story.. ------------------------------------------------ Laney's POV "Where is Bridgit??" i whispered in an...
I just wanted to try it... but i didnt know people would be so harsh.. i was just doing it for fun..
I just dont take well to critisism.. yeah im not a good writer.. i know..
This is my first story ive written and im sorry im messing up.
Oh ok sorry.
I guess i will update... even though no one will like it. ------------------------------------------------ Next Day Cody's POV *Sitting out in...
Well if no ones gonna like it and keep telling me to fix it why should i keep going....
Im sorry that i suck at writing ok happy now.
Ok.. I give up trying to write. im done.
Ok thanks
Ok should i update now? I have nothing else better to do
Really? i wish more people would read it but i guess i did just put it on so it might take a while
Laney's POV "Oh my gosh! He said hey to me and winked!!" Laney excitedly says to herself. She practically floated to her locker until she saw...
Ok i will do that thanks
I will put stuff about the other characters soon too!
I forgot to put ages with the people!! Laney, Bridgit, and Kelsea are all 16 and sophmores. Treyson and Cody are 17 and juniors!
Treyson's POV Dang man practice was awesome! That pass to me was killer! *high fives Cody* Thanks man says Cody. They push through the doors of...
Ok i will do that now Thanks
Should i keep going??