Separate names with a comma.
Lucifer: "It's my business to know who everybody is." (Hey! Don't have my phone with me right now so I'm using this account)
By the way this is 'AccidentallyMe', I don't have my phone on me right now
Lol I'm sure it's unnoticeable sometimes
Well in the victims part, you said women in their 20s and you said on your profile that you're 12 well why would the killer kill someone that's 12...
What first part are you talking about? .-.
What first part?
But I'll join once I get my phone back because my mom has my phone and I have hers. No idea why but just go with it lol. My mom's phone can't...
Wait you said the killer only kills women in their 20s so far and you're 12 .-. The killer should never kill me because I'm just that awesome ...
I'm debating wether or not I should join this or not, it's a good idea but there's been a lot of supernatural RPs
Raven: "Well at least we know what time period we're in and who's in it and how it's going to end. Although this is not a good time period to be...
Raven: -Orders a room from the innkeeper. Goes to the room next to Emma's. Closes the door after Sparrow enters. Sits down on the bed- Sparrow:...
Innkeeper: -Nods- One of the guards: -Turns around and smiles at her- "Everything is set for you, you ladyship." Raven: -Sees Emma- "She looks...
One of the guards: -Walks into the village and into an inn- "Innkeeper! I need a room for this lovely lady here as well as food!" Raven: -Walks...
Guards: -Nods- "Follow one of our guards. He'll take you to an inn and order a room and food for you." One of the guards: "Follow me your...
Guards: -Run up to Emma- "Are you alright? Did he do anything to hurt you?"
One of the guards: "I forgot my sword back there. I'll catch up." -Goes back and sees Nick- "Hey you! Thief." Other Guards: -Hears him and runs...
Sparrow: "So what? We're back in Romeo and Juliet times? Wait Romeo and Juliet is a fiction, it was written by William Shakespeare and was a...
Dialogue shouldn't be that way. Put these "" around your dialogue if you want it to be better. Separate your paragraphs and watch out for grammar...
Lol yeah! What she said!
Guards: "Let's get back. Put him on the wanted list."