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I feel like the cheerleader is the mom. I donno though. Wall me when it's updated please??
Chapter Thirteen "You know what Sam?" Oops. I didn't mean to say his fake name but surprisingly he didn't get angry. "I got a little jealous....
This is so adorable!! BUMP PLEASE!!
Chapter Twelve "What happened? Are you ok?" Kevin said. I hadn't realized I was shivering from the cold outside until Kevin walked over with...
No. It's perfectly fine. Write the way you want (except the grammar. It would be harder to read if the words aren't spelled correctly) because its...
OMG. Please please please update.
Sorry guys. School has been crazy. I have catch up work to do and online classes as well. Ugh. I'll update ASAP.
Chapter eleven "S-s-Sam? What are you doing here?" I wanted so badly to hide under a rock to escape the harsh look he was giving me. "Well I...
I'm sorry guys for not posting and no I'm not doing this to bump my story. I just want to say I'm sorry I haven't continued the story but as soon...
-cries- such a lucky girl whoever and wherever she may be!
Chapter Ten I wanted to run. Run from those eyes but Sebastian's gaze kept following me everywhere. I got very worried he wouldn't want to be...
Authors Comment IM SOOOO SORRY READERS!! SCHOOL IS INTENSE AND IM REALLY TRYING TO SAVOR ALL THE TIME I HAVE THIS WEEK...
Chapter Nine Wednesday morning...toughest decision of my life to pick what to wear. I couldn't decide whether to stick to my usual or fancy it up...
She tried what out and why is her name spelled letter by letter twice?? That's the only two parts I don't really understand. Also in the first...
Chapter Eight "I-I-I I need to go." My eyes widened slightly and I sat up to think and made sure I heard him right. "O-o-ok I guess." I...
Chapter Seven "I know about what?" I turned and ran upstairs to my room. I heard him locked the door and turn the alarm system on. I knew he...
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