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I ran with a plot twist once and it escalated so much but it's so good XD
Bump XD
Giving this a big ol' bump XD
Some sanity is back, you saved my turn eyes from bad plots, grammar and spelling errors which get worse with every correction :) ;)
Love the author's note XD anyway, this has been awesome, keep going :)
Yes it was XD
And there was handing instead of hanging near the end.
I left a trail of stars on Wattpad for you ^_^ anyway,maybe in the first paragraph I think you missed out a full stop, but that's all I can really...
I love this! Awesome work ^_^
If you could iron out the switches between 1st and 3rd person as well. It occurred nearly every paragraph going from "I did this. She done that"....
Chapter 3 - February 1950 Callum couldn’t sleep in anticipation, neither could Corinne; however they slept from pure exhaustion. The hours...
Chapter 2 -February 2015 “But that wasn’t him!” Dae exclaims. The look she receives from Faye and Hazel says oh really. It is a sleepover at...
I have my assassin story but I would have to break down the chapters so much so it isn't a huge block to read (⊙＿⊙) Thank you (*˘︶˘*)
Chapter 1 - February 1950 Callum really wants to write to Corinne to tell her he misses her and that she shouldn’t follow her father around the...
I posted a new story, I have been working on it for a while as I started it ages ago and only just recently found it again so yeah check it out...
Preface Her heart ached without him. When he wasn’t near, or when they didn’t speak, was when it hurt the most. She didn’t know if he felt the...
Hi guys, Ali here again. So do you guys remember when I said I would complete those stories and didn't (and still haven't yet). This story is...
That's cool Zach. Honestly Alex, barely anything, literally nothing
Duuuudddeeee killer phrase for the last paragraph. Good job, high five