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I was on campus reading people's messages when a abbreviation "KIK" in a message hit my eye. When I asked, in general on campus, what KIK is,...
No I think it's good the way it is. Maintain this mood, I want to see what happens next.
So far it looks like your story has a rhythm. You know how like in any sport, I'll use boxing for example, we either fake our shot or punch, or...
Eagerly waiting :D
One piece, and hajime no ippo!!!!!! :D feel free to talk to me about it