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No hate here Just addiction. And you are our drug dealer. Thanks for update
Totally thought it said " For the love of Satan"Blonde moment.
And how can he tell he imbarresed her? Yes she was crying but I didn't see any signs pointing to embarrassment. Slow down and spell things out. Be...
Try and be more descriptive during the conversations. I care more about what the characters are doing when there mad and stuff then dubstep in the...
I must ask sice I am blonde. What is paroxysm? Not even a paragraph in and this writing is to awesome for me Looking good pie! Maybe try and cut...
Just be careful what you post because it can be interpreted in different ways by different people. Again I say slow down, Try and put yourself in...
I also refer you to "Tips for Fan Fictioners" there's a lot of good advice there especially for new writers. Try to slow down and plain out what...
A guy. I think. Since the main characters name in Troy that's what I'm assuming. Anyways. It's pretty good but try to be alittle more description...
When opposites attract and deadly sin are my top two fan fictions. Ever.
Thank you for THE MOST AMAZING UPDATE YET!
I like this way of writing more,it seems more in the moment but I was kinda bored reason about fluorescent lighting lol other them that and that...
Please updateit's really good so far
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Pie you don't know me but I feel like I know you through your story. Yes. It is that goodyou are a gifted writes who can make believable well...