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I lay in bed with my boyfriend, he was lying on his side, facing away from me. I suddenly had a question I was eager to ask him. “Do you love me?”...
I lay in my bed, thinking about the dangers that lay beyond my bedroom door waiting for me. I stared at the ceiling daydreaming on what monsters...
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