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Yes finally some names ^_^ thanks. Ok it's good your doing a great job but I think it's time you bring in some action or at least start hinting of...
It's going in a good direction, keep it up ^_^
It's good so far I like it, um a small comment please introduce the characters with name to give them some kind of identity, especially main...
Wow I liked it but I mostly enjoyed the lyrics they were awesome I like some of the tattoo art makes me want to get onebut cant lol over all...
So I just got done reading your story I think it's good you have something good going on here. I give it an 8 out 10. Reasons why follow-> 1st of...
It's a good story so far I really enjoyed it although I have a question and I would like if you contact me. Some feed back how did the twin...