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Hans and Zhar shoots each other in the head at the same time.
My characters die of an unknown disease.
"The assassin is across the city, raining bullets down onto us. He has advanced sniper rifles, sub-machine guns, and HEI bullets."
"If that woman were to do so, I'd be unsure as to what she would do afterwords."
Zhar laughs. "Maybe from that woman that always knocked me out when we first met?" Zhar gives Arija a teasing grin.
"Well, time for you two to head off to school." He says, and gives them a hug. "Be good, now." Zach: "Bye daddy! Bye mommy!"
"Well then, be both." He smiled.
"What's wrong with it? You look pretty in it."
"What's wrong, Ariana?"
Zhar finishes getting the kids ready for school.
Zach walks into the kitchen, and gets something to eat.
"Well then, let's get you out of here." Hans goes to take a step towards Max, but collapses. "F***!" He looks down at his leg, the bullet wound...
"Well... Go say good morning to your mother. Zach, come get ready for school."
"N-no I'm not... Anyways, shouldn't you be getting ready for school?"
(That still isn't legitimately a sister. That would still be either half or step sister.)
"I'm sorry, but would you rather have him shoot in here, then me tell you?"
(Then Sumi isn't her sister. Not legitimately anyways.)
"What, Ariana?" Zhar says, giving her a smile that seemed nervous.
"Well, uhh..." He stammers, not sure what to say because of what this morning's 'activities' were.
(Well your character is extremely plain and doesn't much info at all... And as I stated earlier, you need a rank.)