Separate names with a comma.
((People have different time zones, just saying))
((I came back to check how things are and I'm glad I permanently quit rp XD I give up, more and more who don't accept advice and don't understand...
Don't reveal the dad, involve him more, but leave the suspense.
Bump
Other than the paragraphing and the spelling(which I assume is because you are too lazy to check through), there's one major problem. I noticed...
Butterfly next pleeeeeaae
bump
((Here's a tip, go to the 6 best friends thread, or the party one. Those useless threads.))
Actually I don't really know why they hate rp I mean if it's because most don't use proper grammar and sentences then I underatand. Or if it's...
:/ I don't think I'm starting this XD
just waiiiit
Don't, I called a mod here Just leave this thread be until she comes.
I'll just call a mod
Okay, then state what we did wrong that wemt against the rules.
"I think it's the guys' choices, really, if Cam and Lauryn allows it. I've been to a million balls, always alone. I think it's fine." Jayley shrugged.
Guys just ignore him, call a mod here if you want, we don't care.
"I don't think this mission is to party around, Summer. We are to be on high alert, right, Lauryn?" Jayley sighs. "In any case, we'll all be busy...
copter*** not plane
spoilt*
"Well, we need to be on our ride to get there, don't we?" Her previous cold act was up. She jumped on the plane, looking all rich and spoily.