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Ah, okay. D:
(The owner's not on currently. Wait for her to reply instead of posting random faces, please.)
Le bump.
I've had the same feeling before. Don't give up on writing, just stop for a little and you'll probably get random ideas, most likely at random...
*I also like some of the vocabulary you've used. For example your metaphor was good.
Good aspects: Hmm, it's okay. I like the way you've made it hook the reader. Improvements: •Use a line like this for the gap between...
Bumping this so others will see it. It's really good, and makes you think. Hopefully some other writers will pick up tips from this. You should...
Bump.
Woah, this is good.
(Can someone fill me in as I'm meant to be Chucky, please~)
I might join later, if thats okay. :3
(Wait... Are we letting this die now?)
(Missed lots... Can someone fill me in please? :3 ((I'll read back but I only skim read and usually miss a lot.)) )
Jess: *Wakes up, confused.*
Jess: *Changes into an old T-shirt and shorts. Yawns as she climbs into bed, quickly falling asleep. *
Jess: *Walks up to her dorm.*
Jess: *Stops outside the entrance and steps of her board, once again tucking it under her left arm.*
Jess: *Nods. Winces then goes back to her skateboard, her face emotionless again. Skates back towards the building.*
Jess: Ah.. I generally do words or symbols, but places sounds cool. She sounds talented.