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WORK FASTER
Its looking really good.
YOU SAID YOU'D UPDATE ()
Will you do another weeny update? Please? For me? I CRAVE THE PERFECTION OF LOVE.
Bravo.
FIRST POST HAD TO SAY THAT SORRY
Why are kids sooo annoying? I have a nephew and a niece ad well as three other babies in my family and I love them all to bits but dammit. They...
Bump. I know I shouldn't be going for these cheesy cliché's but hell I just love them. Bravo!
will try and update today guys
its ok jus' giving pointers :) PLEASE UPDATE.
Feels more like a square. Well done on the update. :) BUMP
Oh and I've seen you put 'I seen him and he seen me.' in other stories and thats the wrong form of tense. You would have to put 'I had seen him...
Oh and by the way people this is not another friendxfriend situation I'll only say this once outside of my updates NICK IS GAY.
Looking good so far
This is fantastic writing, brilliant plot all I could ask of you is to describe their surroundings more.
Cool I thought he was!
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I heard about that, it was brutal and disgusting. It happened a while ago in Scotland. The man who did it in America killed himself afterwards,...
I know, I just get so exited about updating that I post before I've done enough. >.<
--------------- I bet you have no idea what it feels like to have everyone think they know you inside out. I bet it never occurred to you that...