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Jess: -Looks around cautiously. Walks in a different direction-
Jess: -Takes the paper and smiles- Thanks -Looks at her curiously- what's your sisters name?
If anyones pretty good at writing poems can they wall me or something, want to start writing poems but I have little idea about structure/pretty...
This is good I like the way you can relate to it in different ways...
Jess: -Smiles slightly- No problem..-Looks at the sketch again-
Jess: -Looks around-
Jess: -Smiles seeing the picture- Yoyr a good drawer...Thanks I think
Jess: -Feels eyes on her and turns around curiously- Uh, anyone there?
Jess: -Swirls her finger in the water-
Jess: -Looks around the hall-
Jess: -Stares into the water and sighs obliviously-
(Oh yeah, ignore my last post)
(Was it page 117 or did you get on after that?)
Jess: -Rolls her eyes- You make it sound like someone here might actually like her...It wouldn't be that bad if she was kind
Jess: -Laughs- More like 60
Jess: -Laughs and turns to tom- I've heard annoying Fatkins is single though.. (Matron Atkins) -Laughs again quietly and smirks-
Jess: Very -Laughs and smirks- Dont be harsh Elza, a pervert romance is always fun -Laughs again- (Jess is wierd xD )
Jess: -Laughs with Elza and takes a sip of her milk.Pulls a face and pushed it away- Tastes as bad as it smells
Jess: -Wrinkles her nose- And from the smell of it, out of date milk...
Jess: -Nods and smiles- Lucky, she's one of the nicest matrons! And apparently I was one of the noisiest babies...-Laughs-