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"So you're alive." Percyous said as he leaned agianst a tree trunk with a disgusted look on his face and raised a metal flask to his lips. "Why...
Chapter 3-Hunting with Percyous "Why are we here agian?" Aizen asked as he and Percyous hid inside large bushes and watched the flat, grassy...
Grammer. Detail. Organization. Spelling. Check these things.
Darn
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Probobly, we're gonna try anyway
Mezelda dropped down from the rafters and did a turn in midair so she landed on her feet then stood and dusted herself off. She wore a dark cloak...
"I still don't understand why he came in person for some small fry." Percyous said as he watched Hunter and his soilders march away down the road....
Chapter 2 "Welcome to my resteraunt Commander." Percyous said as he bowed to the man wearing a steel chestplate and leggings with a one handed...
Wait, no, three. And we're planning on bringin in 2 of the characters that applied.
Awsome news! We decided to scrap the last update! I told em what happened and they said we could go ahead with our other idea anyway, they...
Darn, didn't work......
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HOLY **************! I ACCIDENTLY DELETED THE LAST UPDATE! MY BROTHERS ARE GONNA KILL ME! Unlease I re-write it exactly as it was writen.......
. . . . Then he must die.
Percyous:*sits at desk being awsome*
She's cheating on me with Roger smith! I knew it the moment I read about the chestnut hair! I hope you two are happy together! But I can't...
I'll collab with you if you want
Tooooo manyyyy rpsssss
This wasn't an argument. It was a disagreement that was being solved with words.