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(Night) -Gives Grey a shot to make sure the wound doesn't get infected. Changes bandages-
"That would be good. You're not scared of shots, right?"
"Xavier is still here."
Will do! Love your name by the way.
"How are you feeling Grey?"
"I think he's waking up." -moves to Grey-
-considers it. Sighs- "Sorry Lex, we can't. Grey will know what we did."
"Well, I'm pretty sure I killed him awhile back Now here he is!"-points to Xavier-
-looks confused- "What?"
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-smirks too- "Not a bad idea Lexi."
"Sorry. But it looks kind of cool." -shrugs-
The point to this?
-shakes off water. Hair is still drenched.-
I'll give you a hint. Nickelodeon.
Correct! Love Train. How about this one. It's kind of hard. Wait a minute. Before you tell me anything how was your day. Cause I've been...
-gets out of water and hears yelling. Goes to Grey's room and see Xavier and Lexi. Faintly sees Snow.-"Why are you still here Xavier?"
-grabs swimsuit and walks toward pool.-
-finishes breakfast and goes back to room. Completely forgets about last night.-
Remember, either keep present tense or past tense. That's the important part. But really good!