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How will it die now if you just bumped it?
I love OneDirection. I'm not going to defend them anything, but it's not like it's against the ToU. And besides, it's also not like the whole...
It's okay. There will be other possums.
TIFFY <3 WEHAVETHESAMETIMEZONES. SOYESTHATWASVERYVERYVERYCOOL. AND LEGIT. That was amaaaaaaaaaaaazing. <33
It's the teacher. My advice is to give more description and suspense. And punctuation. There are some grammar errors, ad it's confusing to read...
It's nice to add paragraphs in between dialogues. It's easier to read. Other than that, it's amazing!
BUMPING THIS. I'll be honest. Some stories NEED this. And AHH. That was a long, long time ago. When PiMD wasn't dead. .-.
>.< I'm going to let you be on the other points. But on the third? It makes YOU sound like the prissy stuck-up girls that you hate so much. I...
Roy just made my day. And isn't it lack of food? Or is it really lack of hunger?
Hawkeye. Spiderman. Flash. Thor. Superman. Lol. A lot.
Jessica. And Kelly. And Kris. And Colton. And Carrie. And Jordyn. And Lee. And Lauren. And Scotty.
Nina. That is all.
It was over the web. And Lime Green. FTW.
Ramen: Ate your bishop with my rook. Starina: yes, you totally should! Even if it isn't that good, the people in FF will only help you by giving...
Yeah but I'm a ninja remember? I can dodge your ammo. And the shot gun can shoot you before you even notice it. You'll probably be laughing the...
Bumppp! And ***** be tripping! machine guns aren't as swaggtastic as shotguns *rolls eyes* By the way...the others might post their Bio...
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Lime Green.
U-p-d-a-t-e-!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "I like it," Sophie nodded her approval, looking at me from up to down. She muttered little critique with her posh...