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Kally: oh Sammie! *hugs her tight* of course he loves you! He's just busy! Emma: *sees jake and walks over then throws my arms around his neck...
Emma: *looks down at the boy underneath me blushing beat red I hear the car past but I don't move why? I don't know I just didn't want to* good...
Emma: *blushes* oh really?
Kally: awww Sammie shhh it's ok what happened? *rubs Sam's back soothing her and looking over at jack confused*
Emma:*follows Nikolai behind the rock tripping and bringing both of us down me on top of him*
Emma: about what may I ask? *softens my eyes looking into ren's*
Penny: *sees the rain and walks over to it* hello?
Kally: welcome *laughs them turns around* Sammie what's the matter *i open up my arms incase Sam wants a hug*
Emma: *i keep laughing until my sides start to hurt then I jump over a fence and I keep going until I see the road*
Emma: If you say so... *flips back my dark blue braid then narrows my eyes* why were you watching me swim? In my slip too!
Kally: *pulls out two bottles and throws one to jack* here.
[color=pink] can you make another short story? Instead of updating? Maybe one without a sad ending?
Emma: *laughs then see him winking and makes my horse go even faster*
Emma: *turns and starts to walk away from her mother and uncle frustrated that no body will tell her what the hell happened to her father*
Kally: *sighs* no, I have absolutely no idea where my sisters boyfriend hides the bloody stuff!!!!! *look in a cabinet* AHA! I found some!
Kally:*walks into the kitchen looking for rum*
Emma: *looks up at her mom then takes off her fathers hat and stands on tip toe to place it on her mom's head*
WHAT AM I DOING WRONG?
[color=darkblue] lol I hope this works!
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