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Nice job so far. Just remember tons of detail, and proofread it for spelling, capitalization, and punctuation errors. Bump!
You're welcome. You're a wonderful writer, and if people read this, they'll be able to see that.
Destroyer, I'll read your stories, if you make more. You should start writing again, because most people's first stories get no readers. Webby,...
This isn't boring. I love it!!! Amazing start!!!!!!
Bump!!!!
It's fine. That was amazing!!! Bump!!!
It's okay Sophia. Destroyer likes to insult people with no regard to their feelings to seem cool. But it's not. I think this story was...
Okay!
Okay, here's how I see it. You probably don't give a ****, but I don't care. I love rps. I don't want to get rid of all of them, because I think...
Nice job!! Remember to put a ton of detail in, if you make another story. Awesome!
Bump!!!!!
UPDAAAAAATE!!!!!
Bump!!
IT'S AMAZING!!!
Bump!!!
Bump!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!
Wonderful update. Bump!!!!!