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Scorpion: can't what
I'm not the norm I'm considered different I'm treated like an idiot constantly because I act differently I'm the constant target of verbal and...
(you should)
Scorpion: -teleports captain back to his house while kissing her- (time~skip?)
Look bub I enjoy writing but it's pretty offensive when you work on something for a month and the first comment is completely negative but then I...
Scorpion: -warps arms around captain and kisses her passionately-
Scorpion: why are you hiding your beautiful face
Pal how bout you try writing a story and never have anyone pay attention to it no matter how long you take writing each chapter and then try...
Ok now I'm ******* ticked someone had better hold me back now!
Scorpion: because you look really cute when you blush
Colin: -puts them back in her hand and walks away saying- we will meet again angel
Scorpion: -sees captain blush and kisses her again-
Colin: -takes Angel's hand and lifts her to her feet and hands her a sack of gold Gilligans- go get yourself some new clothes and something warm...
That's it someone hold me back before I knock this piece of ******* **** onto his ***** *** and proceed to beat the snot out of the ******* *******!
Colin: you've seen what I've done haven't you but I don't hurt innocent people I only inflict harm upon those who are tainted by evil
Colin: what she tried to do the route that both our fathers sailed together by herself is she crazy -runs to the ship- raise the anchor hoist the...
Stories intelligence maybe creativity no because creativity rps have the advantage with randomness to thrm
Colin: -looks confused- why are you afraid I'm not going to hurt you
Colin: -kneels next to her and wipes her tears away- beautiful lady's shouldn't have to cry
I read it 9 years ago in grade three although I will say it was a good story the fact that you shared it is lame