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(very good even with the few spelling errors it's a very captivating story that one just wants to keep reading -the dark critic-)
Colin: -walks into the room- there you are love I've been looking for you
(excellent I had thought about feral chaos but decided not to because when I use him I am unbeatable my first time using him I beat a lvl 100 as...
Character: cloud strife Game: final fantasy 7 Side: cosmos __________________________________ Character: chaos Game: dissidia Side: chaos
(guess who's back guys) Colin: -walks through the castle looking for Elizabeth-
Colin: -walks through the woods to the spot where he first saw Elizabeth- I can't believe it's been twenty years since I first saw her *laughs* I...
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Colin: I'm fine just really tired the niter and fighting really took a toll on me I just need to rest a little
Colin: -regains conciousness hours later-
Colin: -collapses weak and sick from breathing in the niter in the catacombs-
(anyone who gets that reference is awesome)
Colin: -enters the cloister of trials he runs and turns a corner to find a half man half wild boar in his way- Caylix: if you wish to proceed...
Colin: brother my daughter is very ill I fear the worst and have come to face the tria *cough cough cough cough* trials to obtain our families...
Colin: -enters the testing ground and stares at the guardian of the magic spell and says in shock and disbelief- Xarium my brother you are the...
Colin: -walks over to Elizabeth and kisses her- what is it my love? Desmond: what is it mom?