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Great!
Oh my gosh! You are so close, but no cigar! Ha
I called 911 soon after she was done hugging me. The ambulance arrived along with police cars. I guess they had to check if she was alright....
I like it. Update again! Haha
Third-paged already...
Update...
This brought a tear to my eye... Purely amazing. Please continue.
Why not? Here's my contest... I'm gonna let you enter a story... And whichever one gets the most votes wins the award for best story. From me...
Bump.
Bump...and...a smile. :)
If you fix the spacing problem...I could get into this. I like the idea.
Yeah, I'm serious! Haha
I'm a freshmen, and I have a goatee. Hahaha
Yes. You can enter me: Adam Jensen Personality: Nice, but also serious. Kindhearted. Has a dry sense of humor which can be funny. Likable. Does...
So far.
I like it... Suspenseful... Original...
I don't have many, but I update because I like to.
Is everyone new uneducated...?
The plot is a bit...cliche... And weak.
This is awesome.