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This is epic o.0 I want to see that freaked out face o.0
Part Two: Mission FML "You? But—" "I know, I know, I'm pretty special." "But you're...you're just...aren't you needed here?" "We're each other's...
xD Remember to capitalize the beginning of dialogue too
Mine's too long to post so here's an excerpt and there's a bit of language sorry . She looks at me pityingly. I can feel an indifferent scowl...
Oh I'm sorry, Goldialocks in that case Oh, and you guys are too nice...it's so nice that you'd vote for me .
Asking questions isn't bad if they truly don't know...if they've been told and still ask, that's when it gets annoying.
And you do that! I'm not much of a love writer either, and that's okay!
Lol funny. Always nice to see a fresh idea, keep on going, potatoes gonna potate, *coughcoughCherrycoughcough*
Hmmm...one thing...are these characters actually based on us? If so...
This room oozes superiority. The big shiny desk, the nice office chairs, the expensive rug, the fancy paperweights...it screams I'm better than...
Interesting .-.
Best author: PieSexual or Goldialocks Best story: Underland Best RP: um...I dunno .-.
A couple grammar mistakes, and don't put the * on BB codes . Remove them so they work properly, the * is just to demonstrate how to use them .
It's very...I could almost say erotic, but it's more so dark in an explicit manner. As always, impressive.
*have .-.
Aww xD.
I have no clue who you are o_o. Welcome back though :D.
I swallowed hard. He was a handsomer version of me, of course. He smiled a smile I knew anywhere, it meant he was trying to charm people. I saw...
He should kill her because it's what he's programmed to do. Falling in love is far too cliché STRIVE TO BE YOURSELF!
Be sure to type out the full word, space after commas, capitalize first and last names, and you're kind of rushing into it, and that's a problem...