Separate names with a comma.
That made me laugh... I just restrain... Be like "calm down." Only if they hit first though.
I join, respectfully, because I follow all of these, except I NEVER think of hurting a woman.
Daryl's POV It was definitely interesting to see Carter all day, so conceited. I was determined to help him. I walked in the dismal hallways...
We have a brotherhood now? Lol
Colin, I talk about romantic things, I am sweet to everyone, rarely argue, treats girls like queens, I'm a guy. Lol
By the way, you don't need commas after quotations.
Much better!
LOVE IT.
Okay.
Here is the first chapter, I modified it a bit from it's rough draft Lindsey, I hope it's okay. Me and Lindsay worked really hard on this plot....
Update Rainbow! Lol
:D
Happiness, you are a great author!
Listen to Pie!
Continue...
Finish it!
No, finish it. Don't stop because of me, and my personal opinion.
I'm not trying to be mean, I'm just honest.
It's a knockoff of another book, all I'm saying.
I didn't mean to make you feel that way, but I will not tell a lie. I'm like Abraham, the 16th president of the United States. Lol Felt like...