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.-. It seems you're my only reader :3 oh well. At least I have one :3
Nah we're good ._. If grandpa Royale can ever stay up a little longer to help me, we're golden. ._.
e.e Thank you very much. To be honest, we've been lazy e.e. I'll force Roy to stay up later than nine and help me ._.
:3 yay more stories
I love Adam's writing, Rainbow's could be better, but that's besides the point.
Holy crap. I forgot to return on "God dang..." ,_,
Oh and *have
Pardon me, not just 4 or 5, any number.
When writing numbers like 5 or 4, it's recommended to actually write out the numbers. Don't have to do it, just something that looks a bit better.
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She stares at me, her eyes big and wild. "I've always wanted to be kissed..." I smile unsteadily, "For your first time, that was good." She...
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.-. Be sure when putting in dialogue, that you start a new like completely. Ex. Derek walks up to me, his eyes bored, his posture slouching,...
I smile at her, tentatively, not positive on how exactly to go about this. She smiles, nervous. I realize this might go terribly, oh so terribly,...
*to be my brother
:3
*takes a big huff of smoke* just get along, man.
It's our problem free, philosophy, Hakuna Matata
...well...
Great balls of fire.