Separate names with a comma.
Well that was just an example it just seems like the story is rushed adjectives are a wonderful thing and the more you use the better your story...
Firenze: *lets loose a small puff of fire and the map goes up in flames* I wasn't done
Drake: I don't care how lucky you think I am don't treat me like a freak show
It's good but you should probably add more details like "I looked to my feet and saw the decaying body of my former boss" or something like that...
Drake: I don't appreciate being treated like a freak show and I have no problem speeding up the coming of your next life
But do you want my criticism?
Drake: *dueling beth* Beth: *dueling Drake* when we're done I plan to Drake: *casts a spell to make her shut up*
(oh okay) Drake: *regains sanity* why don't you people learn to stay away from me when I'm in a crazy fit I'm not some dancing monkey you watch...
Firenze: yo bitch I was talking to you don't make me light yo ass on fire! Anyway I'll owe you a favor if you do this for me and having a dragon...
Do you want my criticism?
Bump sorry for being late I was busy!
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Firenze: *walks to Sal* does Rosie still like you?
Game-maker: wouldn't you like that?
*2 tributes ambush Matt*
Game-maker: you know *goes into detail of what he would like to do to her^
Game-maker: but you know you want me
Jack: *grins and walks off*
Game-maker: *walks into Frenchie's room*
Drake: *tries to hit Kiki with a bolt of lightning*