Separate names with a comma.
Awwe. Okay!
Wow, it's good Royale! I like it a lot!
Please do. You only updated like twice!
Let's do it. I have a feeling I know what it's about because you gave another new writer the idea of this. Begin to write!
Haha. We all have one..
Well you also haven't updated in awhile.. Try that. Earn your readers back!
Ahhhh! More.
Dell yes, ditchessss! Ahem. I expect Sydney to come to a rescue soon. AND TEAM MASONNNNN!
THAT WAS ONLY TWO. WHERE ARE MY OTHER SIX!?
Please do.
You realize that it says, "Ideas", so there was no way of knowing that that was the rest of the story. You should have just played it off and not...
Whuttt? You don't want an update frenzy? Btw, thank me for this update frenzy.
Noooo!
And also, you have quite a few of grammatical mistakes, but those are easily fixed. Ie. There, their, they're are different. You used them...
Wellllll, it's just the fact that this seems oddly familiar too Royale's and Qin's story...
Uhm so. I am going to cry myself to sleep a few weeks from tonight. In the arms of a sexy, sexy, man. Thank you, Rosie.
After dinner and math homework!
YESSS!
This is the ghost of Sydney.
I will go kill myself now.