Separate names with a comma.
Katherine and Primrose walk over to the woods in the direction Colin came from, they brought their weapons with them.
Name: Primrose Pryde Nickname: Prim Sister; Katherine Age: 18 Weapons: Dmr and Spartan lazer
Katherine: "Prim, stay close we have to move quickly after the fire is put out, we cannot stay in one place, I won't lose you like we've lost...
Primrose looks at her older sister and Katherine looks back.
Great story keep writing. Do your best and correct any mistakes, use good grammar and punctuation within the story
Actually yah can I join
Advice well just do your best and try to keep on one topic in the paragraph transit from each topic to the next
Weapons: daggers
I'm making kitty's sister now) Name: Primrose Pryde Nickname: Prim Sister: Katherine Parents: deceased Bio: unknown Age: 12
Katherine: "I ran from home, but I first tried to fight, brought my little sister with me to spare her from death, now I'm out here with all of...
Sti needs a bit of work but I still like the story
awesome
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Okay on second though I don't want to join
Katherine: " I have to think some more only me and my sister are alive, So is by best friend so I guess I'll make a new place, since my parents...
Yah I love all the action and things you can create using that genre
Serena: Got it Colin *she Walks away to find Storm* Katherine: "So Colin, what's the task we are going to do ?"
I remember now it's just I'm used to being home not in the woods here, I'm Katheirne Pryde, call me Kitty please
Katherine turns around looking at the person, what's your name ? And where are we ? What happened to our homes ?
Katherine stands on a rock looking at the forest