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Oh and age: 17
Oh lawd Sexual relationships and the driving and the epicness jizhshaggz Me likes ._.
I'm assuming this is a realistic fiction type of story. And in doing so, it would have the inclination to be accurate and make sense.
Name:Lynn Newberry Looks:*too lazy to go find a picture I'll post one later* big green eyes, short, choppy brown hair, farmer's tan, a little...
And plus, manslaughter can get you life and beyond in a maximum security prison .-. A child like that would need therapy, and lots of it. Three...
What? The main character's name is Cara...
Grammar. No spaces before periods one space behind, just make sure you double check. Perhaps a bit longer with more detail? Good story though.
What? Just...what? This doesn't make sense...I'd assume the security would be tighter, the people would be tougher, and there wouldn't be a...
Lolwut? So...it's Lolwut? That makes no sense. Why would...Holy Jesus Christ .-. Why would she marry her previous lover's son?
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I go through the day with the familiar quiet attitude. Same routine, same faces with falsely plastered grins and marginally pretty faces with sour...
I'm intrigued by the 'technical' incest. However I always find parents who are so wicked and so ignorant always hard to really believe. I would've...
Oh god why that is the product of my boredom and too much time xD
It's no problem, Eliza. I enjoyed it very much. And you flatter me. I couldn't make anything that could stick around and that flows as well as...
Interesting indeed. I find it slightly fanciful that they're all so...flawless. I think it appeals to the female mind that yearns for a kind,...
I wake up in my room, in my bed. It's the same, messy floor, posters of Harry Potter and Mario, the computer desk covered in wrappers and where my...
The picture would eliminate suspicion. And I, for one, despise spiders >.<
Why would you smirk if her parents are dead...you sick mofos D:
Oooh. One night stand, eh? >:}
Damn. All that talking was hard to get through >.<