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() "Be ver-very still..." -hiccups from crying-
-Drinks a rockstar, looking at the sky-
(HEY JAMES. IM ELMO AND I KNOW IT.)
-Twitches at the cold, looks down-
"Shh...." -Frozen in fear, hugging his arm tighter while staring at the door-
-Quiets down-
-still crying, mumbles- "James..."
-Grabs James's arm, crying-
-Shuts up, a dementor passing by the compartment-
(Nice job little wizard boy.) -Cries-
-hears lily, and starts crying again- (This ES moi. [img])
"I-I-I don't like the dark James..." -Shakes her head- (>:D NOW FOR THE MOST EPIC THING EVER.)
-Breathing slows, twitching still-
-Hugs her knees, sinking to the floor-
-Cries louder- "LILY! I don't like the dark!"
-squeals- (I'm still afraid of the dark now....) -Starts to cry-
YARLY. D:< IT'S KILLING ME.
Now I wanna Glomp you. D:< Damn train!
It's a legit book, I just prefer reading HOOT or Big Nate or something with sarcasm....