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Bump!
We do,Holly.
BUMP!!
So now we know,a month is two days for Chloe
LOL!!
Bump!!
(ok...I gotta go anyway. Piano lesson at 4,gotta practise so I might as well 'log off' now )
Bump!!
Well...I did expect his sister to go into the lake...and she didn't. At least he has a twist,even if it's not that great.
Tiffany:"Thank you..." *smiles*
Well...he's got a not-so-ordinary plot...but his grammar should be improved
Well...there ARE a few grammar mistakes...and I don't get the slave part...but if you omit those it becomes a pretty good story
Tiffany:"감사합니다...I mean,thank you!"
Tiffany:*eats curry rice*"Mmm...it's really good!!"
Tiffany:"Thank you...Shu..."
Bump it's good
Tiffany:*looks around nervously*
Tiffany:"What is this place?"
Tiffany:"Are you sure?"*blushes*"I mean,would I be imposing on you?"