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Here's a few tips: Try not to confuse the reader by paragraphing your writing, spend a lot of time on detailed description on characters and...
If you want real humour you gotta watch The Yogscast, TotalBiscuit or OMFGcata
Blackberry Curve 3G
Nice and hi Dittle
Okay then cool, it's really good
The girl's name should be Swann, with two Ns because she's badass, and nice update
Yes! Lol
Yeah have some females that I can charm
Okay good
Good okay, I'll be sure to advertise you
The epic story is back, love it and love my character!
My little pony, skinny and bony
No Tails' girl is Cream
It's a bit of fun, come on
Qin, give her some slack, it's funny
Tails
Oh
It's rather amazing, when does the proper sex happen?
Saucy
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