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Snow: so your telling me that someone who could beat scar is after me and you think y'all can face him!!!! Scarlet: yes I believe that is...
Awesome haha I was laughing
Snow: I don't want any of you to protect me if it puts you in harms way -frowns- that's the reason I left!
Bump
Login it good job
Snow:-sees will and looks down- h-how did you find me?
I'll forgive you guess haha bump!!!!
Snow: Bella please I can't let you and Lilith do this after all you two have done for me! We don't even know if he's going to hurt me!
Wow that was beautiful keep writing it can only get better
Its good but I would like some build up more sensrey stuff maybe when the propose what they look like where were they during the crash just stuff...
Yay but sigh at not being a villain haha never mind I'm just kidding awesome story, love it.
Hey they're just trying to help okay. They're is already another rp like this and we don't want that owner to get mad at you or others to get mad...
Snow:walks up to the two- I don't need protection or you two putting your selves in harms way against him, he's dangerous and I can't let you two...
Okay can't you block him to make the messages go away but ill try to help with the farming and all that
This story is awesome!!!! I loved it solo good few errors but hey we all make mistakes
Haha yep murder is key to an awesome story
Yay good job love it
Yay I like the first poem good job
Yes I suppose your right but hey I didn't come here to fight I just came to say hello *cue the music* Haha sorry to good to pass up but I...
Update: ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Kyles P. O. V I paced my room thinking about how I saw my Aliza in the arms of another man. Thoughts circled my...