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Jack: Continues yelling. "This is so dumb, figure her being an enemy queen I don't think you'd let her go! Your stupid!"
Jack: "Why does SHE get to be let go!" He hollers.
Jack: He laughs nervously, flailing his arms.
Jack: Turns to Lily. "Uh, not to interrupt, but you said THEM, right? Both of THEM alive?"
Jack: "So that means I'm in more trouble than I thought... Right?"
Jack: "Queen? You mean to tell me..." He stares at Lily. "Oh..." His eyes wide.
Jack: Struggles. "Let me go! When I get out of here!..."
Jack: Turns to face Arktum, slight nervousness on his face. "Uh... Wrong room." He says.
Jack: He finally breaks through the hardness, it being a floor. He pokes out. "Uh... Hello?"
Jack: He begins to dig up, as he hits something hard. "What the...?" He says smacking it with his pickaxe.
(Well looks like I'm heading into unseelie territory ξ) Jack: Takes out his pickaxe as he begins to quickly dig, unknowingly under unseelie land.
(What can I say, I base my characters off meξ. Who needs helping?ξ)
Jack: Shrugs back into the ground, snoring heavily.
Jack: Sticks his head out, hearing a commotion.
Jack: Crawling underground.
Jack: Continues to dig further underground.
Jack: He ignores his Garrett and his stupidity, building himself a couple underground rooms.
Jack: Laughs at Garrett. "I'd better leave, let you think of a better insult. What'll it take, a year?" He says as he burrows down into the ground.
Jack: "Says the little human boy. Strong gust of wind will snap your spine like a twig."
Jack: "I have no problem putting my pickaxe through your teeth like dental floss."