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Jess: -Smiles back and leans up so my lips touch his-
Jess: -Finishes unpacking her things then walks to the woods-
Bump!Its good :D maybe make paragraphs a little clear by using a : Though lol. Just an idea.
Jess: -Laughs looking up at him-
Jess: -Smiles up at him and raises and eyebrow-Like?
Jess: -Smiles- I dunno, you choose..-Looks at him sweetly-
Jess: -Smiles and laughs- Wanna do something other then clean guns? -Laughs-
Jess: -Laughs and pulls a face- cleaning guns
Jess: -Rolls her eyes and laughs, blushing slightly-
Jess: -Smirks looking at Jewel-
Jess: -Smiles at him- What you up too?
Jess: -Light a cigarette and rolls her eyes- Preps and posers, sheesh is this school ever drama free? -Leans back against her bike-
Jess: -Watches them silently-
Jess: -Walks inside and sees Kevin- Hi Kevin -Smiles slightly-
Jess: -sighs- Great I'm locked out ._. -Drives back to school annoyed-
Jess: -Drives home-
Jess: -Parks her bike and jogs over to where the girls are- Wait up! I wanna see your catfight -laughs-
Jess: -Watches them from her bike-
Jess: -Goes out through the exit, grabs her helmet and gets onto her black and red bike. (motorbike) Drives past Emma and Jewel on her way home-
Jess: -Looks at Mathew, frowns and turns the other way.Walks to the music block-