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Jess: -Try's on a black lacy dress and smiles.Buys it and some dark jeans and a leather jacket. Pays the man and smiles then walks to the food court-
Jess: -Walks into the mall then into a gothic clothing store-
Nah, but thanks.
Jess: -Unloads everyone and the equipment but stays in the car- Alex: -Looks at her questioningly- Jess: -Raises an eyebrow and looks down at her...
Sorry, ignore this and let it die.Wrote it when I was kinda depressed and now when reading through it, it sounds really wierd. XD
Shut up and get off forums. ._.
No offence but this is awful.Im not even going to go into it.If you want I'll give you some tips about writing.. (My stories aren't great, but...
Jess: -Let's go! -Laughs- We can practice in the back room of the pub,the manager said -Walks out and hops into a van- Alex: -Rolls his eyes-...
Jess: -Picks up her guitar and shouts to her friends at the back of the room grinning-You guys ready?! Them: Hell yeah! -Laughs and gathers there...
(*to)
Jess: -Walks the music block again-
Thanks
Jess: -Orders a coffee and Walks to school-
Is this reality?One-Shot. Outside of the small cell window you could hear screams and shout.Snorts of laughter;Snide remarks....
Jess: -Walks into a coffee shop-
Jess: -Falls asleep on a lily pad-
Jess: -Gently slips put of his grasp.Kisses Kevin's cheek before silently creeping out.Goes down to the kitchen to make breakfast-
Bump
Jess:-Smiles looking at Kevin, too lazy to get up-
Jess: -Yawns and sits up-